Comments & Ratings
I believe that this is a really interesting, boring, and funny book. I was laughing at loud the whole way through it, except for the boring parts, which weren't very good. |
|This story is completely insane. I feel dirtier, simply carrying its memory in me.|
The amusing thing about this story, is this was probably considered one of the "shocking" stories at the time when it came out. Now it's sort of tame compared some of the other stories we have on the site. (Unless people are going to make dirtier additions to it)|
Anyway I'm pretty sure this concept was based on an old Japanese video game. I guess it achieved its purpose though.
|good but update it soon it gets boring waiting for storys too end|
|I agree with Chubby almost exactly. Finish it.|
Pretty hot story, if you'd just finish it.|
Who HASN'T wanted to become a young school girl, get accosted by a strange man, and star in a porn flick?
This story doesn't deserve that sharp of criticism. Rape happens.|
Is rape worse than murder? Didn't think so. Think of how many murder stories we have.
|Hmm... It's a shame you spoiled your story with rape. It was looking good. Not a very original idea, I must say, but your writing style wasn't too bad. It could have gone somewhere.|
|It sucks we can't have post negative ratings or else i would. All I could say is you need to seek mental help...FAST! What is it with you and rape?|
|Pretty average so far, but with awesome potential.|