Comments & Ratings
|Good job. It was little confusing, so I think it deserves a 9. Not quite a 10 yet.|
|OKay, not the best tho....|
|This is an awesome story. A few spelling mistakes, but otherwise one of the best stories on the site|
|Great work, keep it up|
|Chubbytelewhatever guy is a dumba$$, he dont know what he's talking about, jelous I guess, he cant write worth $hit, anyway NC this story was awesome!!!! Lots of action!!! Definitly a fun read!!|
Dude, I don't understand why everyone else is showering you with praise.|
This story was TERRIBLE.
I guess one of the prerequisites to become a Cop is that you have to write at a 7th grade level?
I'm not insulting your intelligence here, but either you're VERY lazy or you REALLY need to take some basic classes on composition.
|Wow, this one is so awesome. I love this type of stuff, because of Police Quest.|
|I think this was one of the best stories I have ever read and I think you should write more just like it.|
|Well I died, but I am going to do the story again! It was very interesting!|
Hey dude, this is a pretty damn good story. Not my favorite but it dosn't have any great flaws and the writing is good. |
(And as for retlin saying "all the roots are supposed to be the same length" the whiny little bitch needs to take a look at his own tales. I think he just wanted to criticize something and this story must look like heaven to him.)
|Was the guy at Meelbrook you? Were they all your experiences?|
|it was really awesome you should add some extra stuff to finish the story without getting beat up...|
|that story is good. I hink it would b better however if all the roots went abou the same length(loose endings all being at the same spot in the story) other than that, it is really good.|
|Great story man. I like the consistant storyline.|
|Overall good plot line and some interesting choices. Only downside was several mis-spellings.|
|A truly amazing story. Very good storyline no matter which path you choose. Doesn't rely on random coincidental occurances to keep the story going. A perfect 10!|