Behind The Shield

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Pleasekickme	Feb 10, 2023	The story isn't perfect but it is still fun. by Pleasekickme on Feb 10, 2023
Beskar	Mar 13, 2021	Could use a little more detail. I think it’s great though! by Beskar on Mar 13, 2021
Bricksand	Jan 16, 2020	narrative misspellings, character-building not consistent, plot were okay but some were unfinished...overall only 2 stars! by Bricksand on Jan 16, 2020
Xt1000305	May 19, 2012	by Xt1000305 on May 19, 2012
TJMW	Jul 11, 2010	by TJMW on Jul 11, 2010
johnnygat	Apr 3, 2010	by johnnygat on Apr 3, 2010
vancelandow	Mar 14, 2009	Good job. It was little confusing, so I think it deserves a 9. Not quite a 10 yet. by vancelandow on Mar 14, 2009
emily11	Jul 30, 2008	OKay, not the best tho.... by emily11 on Jul 30, 2008
Assassin	Feb 12, 2008	This is an awesome story. A few spelling mistakes, but otherwise one of the best stories on the site by Assassin on Feb 12, 2008
ryogodhand	Nov 28, 2006	Great work, keep it up by ryogodhand on Nov 28, 2006
ThePhantomWriter	Apr 26, 2006	Chubbytelewhatever guy is a dumba$$, he dont know what he's talking about, jelous I guess, he cant write worth $hit, anyway NC this story was awesome!!!! Lots of action!!! Definitly a fun read!! by ThePhantomWriter on Apr 26, 2006
absolutiongt	Mar 25, 2006	by absolutiongt on Mar 25, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jan 6, 2006	Dude, I don't understand why everyone else is showering you with praise. This story was TERRIBLE. I guess one of the prerequisites to become a Cop is that you have to write at a 7th grade level? I'm not insulting your intelligence here, but either you're VERY lazy or you REALLY need to take some basic classes on composition. Yikes, man. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 6, 2006
Alanzo	Apr 5, 2005	Wow, this one is so awesome. I love this type of stuff, because of Police Quest. by Alanzo on Apr 5, 2005
charleeb	Feb 9, 2005	I think this was one of the best stories I have ever read and I think you should write more just like it. by charleeb on Feb 9, 2005
Cab	Jan 17, 2005	by Cab on Jan 17, 2005
Ravenchild	Dec 20, 2004	by Ravenchild on Dec 20, 2004
ShipRaven	Dec 12, 2004	Well I died, but I am going to do the story again! It was very interesting! by ShipRaven on Dec 12, 2004
Karold	Nov 20, 2004	Hey dude, this is a pretty damn good story. Not my favorite but it dosn't have any great flaws and the writing is good. (And as for retlin saying "all the roots are supposed to be the same length" the whiny little bitch needs to take a look at his own tales. I think he just wanted to criticize something and this story must look like heaven to him.) by Karold on Nov 20, 2004
jeffisthebest	Nov 16, 2004	Was the guy at Meelbrook you? Were they all your experiences? by jeffisthebest on Nov 16, 2004
Sash	Nov 2, 2004	by Sash on Nov 2, 2004
LThacker	Oct 19, 2004	it was really awesome you should add some extra stuff to finish the story without getting beat up... by LThacker on Oct 19, 2004
HydraLing	Oct 16, 2004	by HydraLing on Oct 16, 2004
retlin	Oct 14, 2004	that story is good. I hink it would b better however if all the roots went abou the same length(loose endings all being at the same spot in the story) other than that, it is really good. by retlin on Oct 14, 2004
packratt5454	Oct 5, 2004	Great story man. I like the consistant storyline. by packratt5454 on Oct 5, 2004
KatsuyaJonouchi	Jun 24, 2004	Overall good plot line and some interesting choices. Only downside was several mis-spellings. by KatsuyaJonouchi on Jun 24, 2004
lioness1081	Apr 5, 2004	by lioness1081 on Apr 5, 2004
CJW	Jan 21, 2004	A truly amazing story. Very good storyline no matter which path you choose. Doesn't rely on random coincidental occurances to keep the story going. A perfect 10! by CJW on Jan 21, 2004

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