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Extend the Story - Add a Room
The Door
by
CelticFrostQueen
Previous Room
Bradley decides to take the risk and follow the skeletal figure. It hasn't tried to harm him yet.
As they walk Bradley can hear the sound of machinery getting louder and louder.
Soon they arrive at what appears to be a wooden platform or walkway running along a crevice. The figure motions for him to stop. Far up above he can also just make out the moon, peeping through an opening in the rocky cavern.
Bradley can now see that the crevice is actually a runway of metal tracks, the sort usually found in old mines.
The skeletal figure speaks.
"You have chosen the right path, Bradley. Had you followed the whisperings of The Door you would never have found your way out."
As it speaks Bradley begins to feel hopeful.
It continues...
"However, you still have a little way to go before you can walk out of here alive. Make the right choice when it is presented to you and you'll wake up in your own world. Make the wrong choice and you are ours, Forever."
As it finished speaking Bradley could hear something approaching on the tracks. When it arrives he sees that it is indeed an old mine car. The figure motions that Bradley should get in.
Choice
find another way out
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
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ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
No Room Link
altar - ID: 12784
ariel - ID: 12189
bat - ID: 12187
blood - ID: 12188
bone box - ID: 12222
bottle - ID: 12246
demon - ID: 12245
door - ID: 12183
eyes - ID: 12184
father - ID: 12186
gates - ID: 12220
jake - ID: 12199
minotaur - ID: 12785
monster1 - ID: 12185
moon - ID: 12223
mother - ID: 12214
nurse - ID: 12249
open door - ID: 12213
rock man - ID: 12786
rock wall - ID: 12241
skeleton - ID: 12221
spider - ID: 12211
truth - ID: 12250
twins - ID: 12212
vision - ID: 12248
which way - ID: 12224
ID: 134432
ID: 109538
ID: 109537
ID: 109536
ID: 109535
ID: 109534
ID: 109533
ID: 109532
ID: 109531
ID: 38870
ID: 38869
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