This is AderuMoro! As the first story I've read on this site, I'd have to say it's interested me enough to make my own account and I'm even considering starting my own little story, as odd, time consuming, and confusing as it may be.
Anyhoo, I liked the story ^_^ Sometimes I got a little sidetracked so I couldn't stick with the storyline all the time because I haven't eaten a little while. Oh but there were a few typos, like uncapitalized "i's" and at times Ayla's name was typed "Alya." You've given this Adam character quite a few deaths and I was determined to get to the end without dying until I got to a screen that said that I needed to log in. How odd.
AdelleYeung
Anyhoo, I liked the story ^_^ Sometimes I got a little sidetracked so I couldn't stick with the storyline all the time because I haven't eaten a little while. Oh but there were a few typos, like uncapitalized "i's" and at times Ayla's name was typed "Alya." You've given this Adam character quite a few deaths and I was determined to get to the end without dying until I got to a screen that said that I needed to log in. How odd.
Anyhoo, good job ^_^