metalcrisis
Ratings & Comments
Learn to spell. PLEASE!
Good writing and good story. Your rooms loop too much in some places, but other than that it's great.
What's with that guy who goes and posts rooms with more spelling mistakes than words? What's more, why do they all focus on you turning into some dumb antro-animal?
Some of the pictures take away from the dramatic feel of the story, I suggest changing them or removing them.