thoric thoric

Ratings & Comments

I liked it alot. The prose is good. Especially on the last page in the 'route' I took. The one with the sunset by the Moses. The general mood of despair and hopelessness and the rampant corruption adds to the hellishness. Reminded me of India at times.
What Ho! by AlphaDog Mar 19, 2007
Brilliant! I liked how you mentioned India. This is a rather fine example of Wodehousean humour. Definitely a 10.
crap crap crap

reading this story is like square-dancing with a nail studded dildo up your ass


round and round we get around WOOHOO!!! we get AROUND!!!!!
Helot by jeffisthebest Jan 27, 2007
Engrossing and different story.

Nice work.;)