meteomage

this is a lot better than many of the stories on this site.

I really liked this story. I think the numbers and letters system is really good if you are able to fix it.

I really hope you finish this story.

ummm... try to proofread your work a little.. and also space it out a bit when people are talking... i only read 3 pages because it was hard to follow... i had to re-read most of it twice before I understood what you were trying to say

Interesting concept, but this isn't the best place to do it... programming in java or something would be much more efficient.

I think there should be some game over endings though. LIke some traps or being killed by the dog or something.