writer22

I dont think the author is stupid. She tried a new idea and I have to agree that I dident work very well. But that dose not mean you should stop writing...keep it up!! think of new ideas some will work some will not... The important this is that you try!!!

Hmm... every room I tried was not compleat and I just got tired of it. You should work on this story more...

hmmmm... i dont know what to say its funny but kinnda i dont know silly.

This is the stupidest story ever!!!!!

Yea it needs substance. no real plot, I undersand its a maze but you could develop the rooms alittle more. this seems to be just a luck game rather then a story.

I had no idea this story was based on a game untill i read the ratings. some of the choises dont make sence and the plot was very chopy. this needs alot of work.

Not good at all. You need to put more effort in this story... I dont understand the point of this story and the choices were kind of silly. Try to develop the plot more also.

hmmm... everything has already been said about the story... no point on stating what has already been stated. Just try to develop the story alittle more.