dnukem

Very Excellent story. I went back and chose different directions and each different choice led to a completely different place. I do not know how this story could be improved upon.

Very Very Good Story. Would like to see where it goes from where it is.

This is a very well written story. Very confusing but you wrote in the beginning that it was supposed to be that way.

very good story the mana potion part is a bit hard to understand. But other than that very well written.