sansevieria
Ratings & Comments
barney kill
by DSDude999
Dec 11, 2011 
sorry i meant to suggest "kidnapped not kidnaped". Good story.
barney kill
Dec 11, 2011
Not bad. Great concept - Killing Barney never gets old.
That said, a few suggestions. One, check the grammar/spelling on a few pages - for instance, "kidnapped" not kidnapped, and "you're fired" not "your fired".
Also, a little more gore would make this story even more awesome.
Pretty good though!
That said, a few suggestions. One, check the grammar/spelling on a few pages - for instance, "kidnapped" not kidnapped, and "you're fired" not "your fired".
Also, a little more gore would make this story even more awesome.
Pretty good though!
CRACK ATTACK!
Feb 27, 2006 
It's sick! It's demented! I LOVE IT!!
I'm not who think I am
Feb 27, 2006 
Personally, I would recommend selecting the option to end the story rather than have all these DON'T CLICK choices on the screen. That is just a pain in the a**. Other than that, it is a pretty good story.
Hollywood or Bust
Dec 11, 2005
Quiz Show of......Death
Dec 11, 2005
SICK!!! DEMENTED!!! I LOVE IT!!!