DavidSky

This story has some big problems. Choices are random and it's filled with spelling errors. The basic idea is good and some storylines are OK, but overall it's kind of an inconsistent mess.

Good story that works well with the format. It got a little confusing though--you really need to be careful and read every single entry, which ended forcing me to struggle to remember what I'd selected and what I hadn't. I think if the story had been spelled out just a little bit more, my own personal feelings of frustration would have been lessened.