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Ratings & Comments

Well done so far - I can't wait to read more. Close detail and quit the adventurous story!
Dogfight by AlphaDog Nov 30, 2004
Nice job, great detail and I love the Snoopy allusion ;)

I also appriecate the lenth of the story, and how it still wraps up nicely in the end. Write on!
Love what you've written so far, and the Biblical principles are refreshing to see - well done!