MegaProto
Ratings & Comments
Pitch Black
by TheKoolAidGuy
Jun 26, 2008
I love it!
I like the punctual style and the absurdist humor.
Some bits are a little hit or miss, but mostly funny.
Some bits are a little hit or miss, but mostly funny.
A perfect example of what the 1 rating is for.
I was expecting a lot worse.
But, once I got over the lack of paragraphs, it wasn't all that bad.
But, once I got over the lack of paragraphs, it wasn't all that bad.
Quality is highly varied.
Mostly not so good.
Mostly not so good.
I don't like you...
But... I like the story...
But... I like the story...
I reset the ratings just now. I rewrote a lot of the rooms to not murder english so much. I'm hoping people will now think of it a little bit better.
Worst story ever.
A note to add: This is currently on hiatus.
Three of my friends and I.
You have taught me that if my story started with drug use, less people would've dissed it.
Oh, your story also kicks ass.
Oh, your story also kicks ass.
That made me use the funny haha
ITS MAH STORAHY
nice goin minicorr!