algrewehou

Pokemon is awesome. This story gives readers a chance not only to reiterate their own version of the Pokemon television show, but answer questions like, "What if Ash never met Misty?"

This is a great story because there are so many contributions and the story branches so randomly that it should appeal to anyone who reads it. There are squirrel's, too, i think.

The concept of a maze is really cool. But I prefer to have more skill involved, such as riddles and the such, to help me. Also, I luckily finished it on my first try. (Note, I said luckily). You really should make the correct path much longer. I hope this helps you improve on your future stories.

despite the fact that it is a story about absolutely nothing i am still able to add pages that i see are very good. besides i find myself bored very often and this pretty much sums up the kind of things i think about when i'm bored.

I've only been a member on this site since yesterday; therefore, I have very few stories to compare it to. However, it is the best story I have found where I can contribute greatly. In fact, I can see myself eventually writing over half of the story. Besides, I like the wild west.