funkymango

The detail put into both the story and the different paths for the characters is amazing and I must commend you on your huge effort. Very cool End!

ps - please don't delete the comments :)

Well done. The story has a good flow to it, and overall it's very enjoyable and amusing to read. Would have given a 10 if not for the typos.

Hey, now there's some funny shit! But you need more fighting and less spliffs to keep the reader into the story. When can we kick Shredders ass man?

Very interesting! Has potential.

A theological story! That's a first for the site. Verisimilivirate is very enjoyable and well written. Being and Archangel with superhuman powers is a very cool concept. Keep on writing, this story could be really popular!

Very clever and cool. I'm looking forward to reading more or maybe adding some rooms.

It's based on the game right? A descriptive story that has potential. I would like to see it become a longer story where you can go a do almost anything on the high seas. Can't wait for it to be finished.

Has potential and could be an intersting story if it was actually 'finished'.

A well written and well thought out story. However, put a space between each line of dialogue to break it up. Lots of spelling errors and capitals missing too.