WarlordRak

The storyline has very good potential, but I got lost in the bad grammar. Keep trying though!

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And that's all ah got to say 'bout that.

Great story and great sub stories. Overall, an enjoyable experience. I give it two thumbs up. Up what? Don't ask.

All I can say is "Wow!"

That was a very cool story. It took some doing, but I think I managed to piece it all together.

Awesomely put together.