Pelyphin
Ratings & Comments
Mystic Elevator
by donteatpoop
Mar 4, 2015
Deserves a good rating
Just testing
This is hilarious
I'm going to knock this down one more time. Sorry.
This one deserves to be on top (at least compared to the others at the top of the "home" page).
This is a comprehensive and complete work, thoroughly enjoyable. It could probably have been better, but you got bored. "Eternal" is not as good as this.
Your stories, in the order that I remember and value them: Necromancer>Legend>Ground Zero>Repression/Geek>Death Song>Paradise Violated>Eternal>Alpha Wolf>A Very Special Infinite Story.
I don't actually remember that last one. The reference merits a mention, though. If I reread everything, the order (certainly the number) of stories mentioned would be different. I'm not going to do that. "Eternal" would rate higher, but it's just too - fucking - thorough for its own good. By the time I finished the last branch, I was very bored. That's unfortunate (the quality was at least as good as the first branch I tried), but the sad truth is that brevity is sometimes a virtue. You boiled every last possibility out of that story.
I identify with you on a lot of things, and I get the compulsion to *finish* it. This "10" is for all of your stories, for king and country. Cheers.
This is a comprehensive and complete work, thoroughly enjoyable. It could probably have been better, but you got bored. "Eternal" is not as good as this.
Your stories, in the order that I remember and value them: Necromancer>Legend>Ground Zero>Repression/Geek>Death Song>Paradise Violated>Eternal>Alpha Wolf>A Very Special Infinite Story.
I don't actually remember that last one. The reference merits a mention, though. If I reread everything, the order (certainly the number) of stories mentioned would be different. I'm not going to do that. "Eternal" would rate higher, but it's just too - fucking - thorough for its own good. By the time I finished the last branch, I was very bored. That's unfortunate (the quality was at least as good as the first branch I tried), but the sad truth is that brevity is sometimes a virtue. You boiled every last possibility out of that story.
I identify with you on a lot of things, and I get the compulsion to *finish* it. This "10" is for all of your stories, for king and country. Cheers.
No issue with the story. Ready for some change at the top of the page.
I read this along time ago. Quality is not an issue - given the history - but others deserve to supplant this.
No offense to the original effort. I want to see something new at the top of the page.
The low rating is - itself - unwarranted.
This story should not top the charts, though.
This story should not top the charts, though.
Pale ale, stout (porter). Nailed it.
Good to see you alive and kicking, Sev.
Good to see you alive and kicking, Sev.