Although I am a great fan of fantasy stories, I feel that this story lacked fulness. It was well written throughout the creator's pages with a smattering of misspelled words.
I feel like there should be a bit more description of the surroundings (which makes the fantasy genre appealing) and more rooms to explore.
shuttlesworth50
I feel like there should be a bit more description of the surroundings (which makes the fantasy genre appealing) and more rooms to explore.