Lucid

Great story! Really funny!

It has some potential and some good pictures. The story doesn't quite develop. The maze seemed random and out of place. Also, some of your contributors had very poor writing making the story difficult to read (spelling, paragraphs, etc).

It is now finished! I hope everyone enjoys it! Please rate it and consider voting for it.

This story is a lot of fun, nice and gruesome!

It's a neat story, has some interesting looping that works well with the amnesia idea.

This is a great story for Harry Potter fans! I love the different versions of pictures, it was really neat. They story seemed classic Harry Potter, which was what the author was going for. I hope that the author finishes this story.

This story is a lot of fun, one of the best ones I've seen.

Great start! Love the graphics!

Sorry, it's incoherent.