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Great work sleazak! This story can be even better with a little more work and effort. Perhaps adding some more pictures will make it more exciting and engaging.

This story is interesting, but it could use a little work. Perhaps redoing the entire story, and including an actual plot will make it more fun and engaging. A little organizing and touching up would really pay off. Keep up the good work and give us more to expect in the future. ;)

Nice work first. Very visual, interactive, and amusing.

Not bad I guess. It gives some good advice to the younger audience. Too many THE ENDs, though.

I must admit, I was utterly offending by some of the rooms people created. Such as this one below. When you choose "go to the 1-guy table" and "you are a guy" this shows up. The freak who created this was not even gay, but probably an immature 11-year old trying to make gay people look bad. I've noticed a lot of crap like this. This gay stereo-type has to end. Do you know what I mean?

Here it is:

Chapter Tree Level: 3 | Room ID: 9471

The guy at the table jumps up and gives you a big hug. "Hey, sweetie!" he purrs, "I've been waiting forEVER! Where have you BEEN?". You make a half-assed excuse about having to stay late at work again. Your boyfriend's eyes shift to the floor. It's obvious that he doesn't believe you. You guys have been having trouble in your relationship for quite some time. The thing is, you think that you might actually be straight. You're just not sure how to tell him.
Room created by Pixielaughs on Dec 4, 2003 02:12

Go Back A Room

Choose:

Keep quiet for now, the relationship will end itself.

Get drunk and tell him you're straight.

Nice work here. I've seen better. I've seen worse.

Not bad, not at all. I have seen better, and I have seen worse. This story is somewhat asmusing.