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I like how the story unfolds as you go. Nice work.

Such low brow tactics, such undermining, such backstabbing, betraying and cheating. Such realism.

Kinda cute so far. I like it. Just need to develop it more, is all.

The story title and the story don't seem to corrolate, and the story itself doesn't make much sense. Sorry =(

A world of dreams. Where anything is possible, the unlikely is probably, and the impossible lies just around the corner. I love this story. I feel a sort of connection for it, I don't know. It's superb. It has such amazing potential.

It looks like the beginning of a truly marvelous epic adventure. I can't wait to see the story unfold.

When I first saw the other ratings I didn't know how good of a story this could possibly be. Until I read. It's based off of Timeline, but the similarity mostly ends there. The descriptions are vivid and strong without overwhelming the page. It's logical to a degree so that it pays to make actual smart choices rather than what an author "chooses." Awesome story. Very awesome. Can't wait to read more.

It most certainly seems well thought out. Fantastic use of pictures also. Enough of variety to keep ya interested, but not so much that it becomes unbearably random.

Wow, I read all of it! It is so random, screwed up, grammatical incorrections, coincidental plot, unrealistic, so messed up it's funny, totally inane, wierd random endings, incoherent choices, and leaves me with a strange for pizza. It is not unique in this aspect, but it *is* the only story I have read that does it on purpose.

Haha, it's quite very funny. Gives you a good laugh.

I'm sorry, maybe if this was in the humor section It might have gotten a better score, *might*. It is filled with rooms of an exceedingly large number of random choices, in which only one or two actuall continue. Sorry, guess I just don't like it much.

A young girl going through an identy crisis. A nice short charming story.

Undeed, the quality is highly variable. Still, some of it is very good. Some of it is very random. I guess that's what you get with a wide spectrum of contributors.

Yay, I got a dollar. Haha, funny and challenging.

Very cool.

I like it. Reminds me of Johnny English

A truly amazing story. Very good storyline no matter which path you choose. Doesn't rely on random coincidental occurances to keep the story going. A perfect 10!

The sequel to the Game Show of death, this equals if not goes beyond the first one.

I like it a lot. It's complete, and it's very good. Granted, it may not be the hardest to complete, but it is very thorough, and will have you thinking at least a bit. (or a bit more)

I can't wait to try the sequel!

(Haha, it *was* a lucky guess on the last question!)

Yay! I'm so happy to see another romance story on this site! A complete on at that. Good for you!

A great beginning. I love it!

No comment. Well, you know what I mean.

I like where this story is heading. Good luck.

If this was in the "humor" category, it might have got a higher rating from me. I expected better.

Not bad. Could use some more work.

I don't like it.

Hey, this is pretty cool! I really like it. Good job, I can't wait to see more.

Wow, I love this. You are an excellent writer! This is truly amazing! I am very impressed. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

I give this a one. Sorry, but I'm hard on romances. Also, I suggest adding more rooms.

A horrible example of looping! Haha! This is the rating you would get if you room loop like this!

This is the first finished story I have ever read. Congratulations.

Very good. I like what I see so far. Keep it up, man!

Excellent. I'm excited to see where this is heading. Keep it up everyone!