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Ratings & Comments
Time Traveller
by AgentRebellion
Apr 8, 2004
This is a really good story. I like the writing style.
Great story! I wish you had added more detail to Ester's surroundings. It would make the story much more vivid and when it comes to the choices of left or right it would make it easier to choose the correct one instead of guessing.