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I'm guessing that this is unfinished? There are a lot of loose ends…

There are some grammatical errors.

When…When I grabbed the spare leg, I thought that I would attach it to myself…But instead I attacked the bear?! Anyway, I like the premise, but more details and clearer paragraphs would make this story much better.

There's a spelling error in the beginning, and some format mistakes.

At some point, my friend "Jake Stater" turned into "Peter"?! And the story is sort of…well, boring. I like high/middle school stories and I've tried to write them, so I understand somewhat that they're hard to write. Maybe try for more details about the reader's surroundings and characters?

I liked this story a lot because of the sheer basicness and humor. :D

I'm rating this 3/10 because the title is misleading. "Naruto Adventure" should be "How You Met Your Naruto Boyfriend" or something, because that's all it talks about.

I did not enjoy this story. I didn't believe the officer when he said that they had tried to teach her how to be a doctor, but then KILLED her?! What the heck?! As the reader, I didn't feel like I was immersed enough in the story, so I will give this a 1 star.

I only got one ending "Gold Medal, I survived", but I found this very entertaining and intriguing! I loved how some parts I doubted myself and how parts I was confident, but most of the time I had no clue what the author had planned. Thank you, Author, for this incredible story!

I liked how there was so many options and some parts made me giggle. But maybe a little more detail? There was only one sentence for each door. But good work!

Um…It was funny in the beginning, but then it wore off once I realized that you can't do anything else in this. Maybe more detail?

I'm being biased LOL BUT THIS WAS WRITTEN IN ONLY 2 DAYS WOW IM AMAZING :D