Cat2000

This is very good and there's clearly been a lot of work gone into it. A note, though - I noticed that, on the 'refuse' room, there's an extra quotation mark right before the Captain starts shouting. It's a minor thing, but figured I'd bring it to your attention anyway.

Good work on this and I look forward to seeing your updates. This is a very interesting style of IS

Very original and interesting. Good job on this!

I've read through everything, I think, and am still confused by what's going on - but that only makes the story better, I think. You did a great job on this!

I haven't completed this yet, but just wanted to say that this has been an exceedingly enjoyable read so far. The characters are interesting and engaging, and the plot is awesome. Great work on this!

Apart from the comment I already made about perhaps making the first few rooms a little longer, I can't see anything else that needs improving, so far, at least.

I do think this is interesting so far - it's certainly caught my attention. I look forward to reading more as you update ^^

I would say that this story does have potential... However (and I've been guilty of this before), it could use a little more description, and pictures might be an idea to have in it?

In any case, you do have a good start, and it would be great if you would continue this.

Very good. I especially like the music right at the beginning. The use of pictures is great

It's relatively easy, though it does take some time. When you get to a crossroads, look at the links to left and right. The link(s) you've already clicked on will be shaded differently to the ones you haven't