justarandomperson

I really like the story! But I didn’t like that you had to mess around with John and had no choice of who to be with. I really want the choice to be with Chris instead, and also it would be really cool if you continued! Have a great day!

Okay- I’m just going to say this. I’m kind of mad right now because I wrote a room yesterday but didn’t save it, so now I have to rewrite it. This is also my first story I’m actually sticking to, hopefully the first one done. I don’t know how long it will be. Also, I’m by no means a professional writer, I’m just a teenager. Please don’t yell at me. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism taken, but don’t just say that you hate my story. I need to know why you hate it. I’ll update this when I get farther.