Had the urge to go searching for CYOA content this weekend, which led to this website, and then, this story. Signed up for this site to write this comment!
I really enjoyed this story and could tell early on that the writing was of good quality. The setting and flow were strong, and the body horror, gore, and unreliable narrative passages worked well. I’ve only gone through it once but it felt like a complete experience.
Keep up the good work — I see that this is your first posting but I’m looking forward to what’s next! :)
RamenJack
I really enjoyed this story and could tell early on that the writing was of good quality. The setting and flow were strong, and the body horror, gore, and unreliable narrative passages worked well. I’ve only gone through it once but it felt like a complete experience.
Keep up the good work — I see that this is your first posting but I’m looking forward to what’s next! :)