poak94

I like it, I just sometimes feel like I'm missing references to halo?

meh it was a good story!

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e-mail me when you fix the loose ends. then maybe I will give you a rating

I couldn't get past the intro on this one.

Never the less, since this is the first rating, I will give you a 7.5.

(mostly because I love RPG games.

Hey this is me. the writer. I know this is kind of like cheating, giving myself a good grade and all but, I just wanted to point out that I am adding more and more to this story every day. You can come back later in the week and find things completely changed up! (P.S. if you make it to a loose end, consider yourself a winner.)

I feel that most rooms just lead to the same ones, it got kind of boring. also

DA-RAVEN YOU CANT LIKE YOUR OWN POST YA NooB!

P.S. happy birthday!

same here