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*Your Crush* by dami5864697 Mar 28, 2019
GRAMMAR! Your grammar really need some work. Also your first part made no sense! It was just saying you are you but if you want to change that pick an option. You didn't even create characters. The reader doesn't know who they are dating!
Just boring. Basic decisions. Barely did much. I thought there would be more excitement.
Pretty good. Keep writing!