FizzWolf

I liked it. At first I thought it would be a fun little story, but this was funny. I liked how it was just that one choice, that bugged the Text so bad. XD Good job!

If I could give this a 0, believe me, I would. I was enjoying until it ended. What idiot did that? If your looking at these reviews to see if the story is good based on other opinions, it's not. This is awful. 'You realize what a loser you are for liking Harry Potter and kill yourself' now, I don't care about that. What I DO care about, is that you are mentioning suicide, which is a real thing. People might think I'm stupid for saying this, but when a kid or teen with depression see something like that, they might believe. And don't go saying, "Oh, how would you know?" My answer is, "Because I struggle with this kind of stuff." Which is true. So, I would love it if the author deleted the story. Anyway, yeah, this story absolutely sucks, in many different ways.

This is a great story! Keep up the good work. UwU