FictionLV

There are too many deaths in this and they're all too random and repetitive. ._. I'll give you a good rating because this seems interesting but its bad so far.

This is good so far ^-^

My gosh this story... sorry but there are a lot of issues

This looks too much like someone else's story

This is an awesome story ^-^

A wonderful adventure

I wanted that Charmander ;-;

So many typos, awful sentences and drugs. Where do i begin to explain how awful this is?

The rating system confused me and I gave it the wrong score >.<