Sobsz

The story part is great. I may be biased here, since I'm a sucker for brain-uploading sci-fi and all that, but it still genuinely made me want to read it. However, the interactivity was heavily limited, with the important choices being blocked off by the author saying "*shh* this isn't the choice I want you to make, go back and push the other button". Even a simple dead-end would be better than this. Mainly since this breaks the immersion, but also because it goes against the concept of interactive fiction, which this website is all about. Despite all that, I would happily read a sequel to this. Keep going!