Broacastshrimp

Havent finished it yet but its a 10 so far! Spotted one/two misspells buts thats nothing. Very advanced from your last one more detailed and just amazing!

Very good job! A very fun story and i hope you make tons more but take your time on them or stuff gets rushed! 10/10

The story was ok and the grammar was good but there wasnt much to it. Maybe more choises so you can go around the collage more and picture how it looks? Plus try and add something to the scenery path.