GundamMeister

Add more description....and by that I mean give the users an option to continue the story in a "clean way" or the "dirty way" at every fork, this would at the least shut up the damn critiques who don't understand the greatness of your work and how difficult it is to make even the "worst cyoa" (reference towards stories from writers with poor imagination and low grammar skills), over and above I believe this is by far very deserving of 10 stars and with a bit more of what I said about options, as stated above this might just be the most read story.......and I really appreciate everyone's effort in writing this( in an event there are more than one writers), so all I am giving is a suggestion for making the story better though it is up to you to make it better.