Hi, Mizal!
I was moreover thinking of this to be a simple, influenced storyline. I don't recommend this story to you if you enjoy a large amount of text before making choices, because it's kind of time-consuming to read a lot of detail and then making choices that don't make a subtle difference, in my opinion.
I do understand that many people probably think different, and so I created a short introduction at the beginning. I greatly appreciate the fact that you left a comment and rated how it failed to meet good standards in your opinion, that means a lot.
To conclude, perhaps you could tell me one of the stories that you think are well-created, and I'll try and improve using that.
ItsJB.
ItsJB
I was moreover thinking of this to be a simple, influenced storyline. I don't recommend this story to you if you enjoy a large amount of text before making choices, because it's kind of time-consuming to read a lot of detail and then making choices that don't make a subtle difference, in my opinion.
I do understand that many people probably think different, and so I created a short introduction at the beginning. I greatly appreciate the fact that you left a comment and rated how it failed to meet good standards in your opinion, that means a lot.
To conclude, perhaps you could tell me one of the stories that you think are well-created, and I'll try and improve using that.
ItsJB.