twelveazaleas

I'm new to this site and this is one of the few I have read that is ultimately delighful! I love it, and I'm at lost for words on how I could love it even more. It's rare to see a finished piece like this. Although I found it very short, I can also say I want more. More of these please? And I know it's such a chore to write multiple routes all at once (considering your number of chapters), it would also be great to make it longer, for the reader to really get to know the guy because it has such a fast pace.

Other than that, it is brilliant. Thank you for the great read.

I think it's pretty romantic, until I realized it was two girls making out. Don't get me wrong, I'm not against them. It's just that it lacked a sufficient amount of background. But your writing's good. Just a little improvements here and there.

I'm still laughing at your story. The ending was good. The choices weren't bad also. I hope you make more stories like this. Cheers.

I wish there was more room to move around though. Nonetheless, it was good.

God, I love this! Even though the ending looked a little rushed, but overall, it had the guts to go through such a daring topic.

Cheers.

It has so much potential! I'll be excitedly waiting for updates.