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New School by Lackofmop Mar 18, 2014
Summer Fling by Lackofmop Mar 18, 2014
Agent 49X: The paintball vendeta by Lackofmop Nov 18, 2013
Flow Vs Diva!!! by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
Jedi or Sith by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
The Slasher is comming for YOU by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
Exploitation Theater by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
Viral Infection. The first hours. by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
Decent.
Sonic adventures by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
PROJECT: Absum by Lackofmop Oct 13, 2013
A little incomplete, but has potential.
There Will Be Blood by Lackofmop Oct 10, 2013
The Totally Random Courage/Computer Slash Story!!!!!! by Lackofmop Sep 16, 2013
The Great Adventure of Aaron Appelapolous by Lackofmop Sep 16, 2013
Big Purple Bear by Lackofmop Sep 16, 2013
Pretty stinking funny.
Xeresgate by Lackofmop Sep 5, 2013
Awesome!
What Non-Western story do you belong in? by Lackofmop Sep 5, 2013
Pretty good... I was a warrior! Blood, gore, fighting, war. (hey, that rhymed!)
Ultros The Octopus by Lackofmop Aug 30, 2013
1,222 hits... Nice!
A Brutal Slasher Story - Please Add On To This by Lackofmop Aug 17, 2013
Doesn't last long enough
Holy Fuck by Lackofmop Aug 17, 2013
Terrible
The Love Of Your Life by Lackofmop Aug 17, 2013
Even though it kinda sucks, I'm giving it a 7 due to many paths.
The Hunger Games by Lackofmop Aug 17, 2013
Sorry, but I couldn't tell if this was serious or joking.
When I wasn't looking... by Lackofmop Aug 17, 2013
AWESOME
Feelin Lucky?....Punk? by Lackofmop Aug 14, 2013
To neutralize the 3.
A Trip to The Past by Lackofmop Aug 5, 2013
It's awesome. I just wish you could choose the laser sword.
The Roundhouse by Lackofmop Jul 21, 2013
Amazing.
Legend by Lackofmop Jul 21, 2013
Awesome.
Kiara's adventure by Lackofmop Jul 20, 2013
Reached an unfinished path WAY to quickly.
Questerman by Lackofmop Jul 20, 2013
This is actually decent, and much more creative than most things seen on the site. But still needs a [i]lot[/i] of work.
Within the Depths of My Imagination by Lackofmop Jul 20, 2013
It's okay. But, tone down the erotica. It's perfectly viable to make stories have sex like this, but at least add some story first.
The Choices You Make are Important ~ Substance Use/Abuse and Personal Safety by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
10
Batman: Gotham Knights by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
Good writing.
Sonic World Adventure Rush! by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
It looks like a cool idea, but doesn't work.
The Last Stand by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
I chose 'jimmy', and nothing happened. That makes the score a lot lower. However, the writing was okay. Not that good, though. It earned a 5.
Death Song by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
This is totally awesome. One of the best fantasy stories on the site.
Truth or Fail by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
Fail, not truth.
A story by Lackofmop Jul 19, 2013
I'm giving this a 10 'cause I'm a crazy person.
Stuffguyman in the World of Things by Lackofmop Jul 18, 2013
horrible.
A Mystical Adventure by Lackofmop Jul 17, 2013
This is a prime example of a great fantasy story... Look forward to seeing more.
the super random story of random stuff..... by Lackofmop Jul 17, 2013
This is horrible.
Horror of Horrors! by Lackofmop Jul 17, 2013
It's okay, I guess. But you should add more of the stories.
Will you die or fall in love? by Lackofmop Jul 14, 2013
Horrible.
dookiemon: the day of a trainer by Lackofmop Jul 14, 2013
Hilarious.
Green Pigs Adventures by Lackofmop Jul 13, 2013
Kind of funny... but a little pointless.
The Stupid Story by Lackofmop Jul 13, 2013
Kind of funny... but not that good.
Avater The Last Firebender by Lackofmop Jul 13, 2013
Wow, this is terrible. The endings are so abrupt. Also, (and this is the main reason for your low score) you have to use quotation marks ("") whenever characters talk.
Government by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
a little funny, if you like satyric humor.
This Story is Going Nowhere Fast by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Kind of funny, I guess.
Vengence Chapter 1: Rise to power by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Has a lot of branches... And Pretty good writing...
Diamonds Are Expensive by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Totally hilarious.
dookiemon: the day of a trainer by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Oh so terrible.
megaman chronicles vs cut man by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Bad spelling, but a satisfactory number of branches, and I liked that it was a mega man game.
More Randomness by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
Pretty funny... The low rating is only because you used that tired old start, 'you have a whole day to yourself, how will you spend it' that I've seen a thousand times.
RANDOM by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
I haven't even played this yet, but I'm sorry, I have to give it a low rating. The only reason is, I've seen about a thousand games that start off like this.
Downworld by Lackofmop Jul 6, 2013
This is decent... The writing could be better, but it had a lot of branches and was satisfyingly hard... The 'r' rating is completely unnecessary, though.
Fortunately, unfortunately (a very giant game) by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
I'll just give it an 'average' rating to start off.
A ghost, a room, and two grenades. by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
This is just so I can see your ratings... Also, please help with this! Thanks!
The One Word Story! by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Good idea, and it's kind of funny.
Dont Push The Red Button! by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Totally hilarious.. Not much choice, but awesome.. doesn't quite deserve a 10, but this will make up for those idiots who give it a '1' with no comment.
Blind Date by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Hilarity.
They Can't Kill Me by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
They can kill you.
Heroes in a Half Shell by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
funny.
Warlords: Strategic Conquest by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Amazing.
A Harry Potter Choose Your Own Adventure - Going to Hogwarts by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Let down.
Mr. Wiggles Big Adventures (Not a Childrens Story) by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Funny.
The Great Adventure by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's okay. Needs to be longer.
Supreme Quest by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Not enough choices.
jawa starwars adventure by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's pretty funny.
Epic story of survival by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's funny, but the story's not that good... Still a good story tho.
Life as a superhero/villian by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's good so far, but you need to finish it.
The House by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Pretty funny... But gets old quickly.
The Heist by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's actually pretty decent.
Mage Quest by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Kind of funny... Didn't like the die rolling. But ok.
A Day In The Life Of An Average Person by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Meh. Reasonable amount of paths. Not really that great, but okay.
Random Adventure by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
terrible
wired pokemon adventure by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
awful
YOU save the entire Universe! by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Hilarious.
fight for the school 2 by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Funny, but not that good.
Dungeons and Dragons Monsters Quiz by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Haha funny... But nerdy, too.
Pokemon Revolution by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Lol this is pretty funny... But needs better spelling and grammar.
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Red by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Meh. Kind of funny, I guess.
You've Got Mail! (1) by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Oh and this rating is to make up for the haters who just put half a star with no comment.
The neverending story by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Hilarious... I was laughing the whole way through...
Leave All Your Hate At The Door by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
There's not even any branches. And the writing and grammar isn't much to talk at.
Get yourself a love muffin by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's okay, but not that good. A little bit boring.
Escape Artist by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Pretty terrible...
Breathe your last Breath by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Two words... Bad spelling.
Harry Potter Fanfic by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's decent, I guess.. But there's almost no branches... It's too short.
The life of YOU! + Facepunch by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
terrible
You've Got Mail! (1) by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
This is absolute hilarity... I love it... Only wish there were more branches...
Legend of Zelda by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Monotonous and boring, but entertaining. (at least a little bit)
The Adventures Of Kat by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
It's a good story... Has a lot of paths and is very diverse, but some choices are lackluster... Good overall though.
the first adventure by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
Um, it's okay, I guess. The grammar could use some work.
Amnesia the dark descent part 1 by Lackofmop Jun 30, 2013
Um this is okay, but this site is for choose your own adventures only. So I'm giving it a "4".
Final Quest by Lackofmop Jun 30, 2013
Good and has a lot of branches, but predictable.
Infinite Cheesecake by Lackofmop Jun 30, 2013
This is ok
You cannot survive this game. by Lackofmop Jun 30, 2013
I'll just put this at first - if anyone disagrees, I'll change it.