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New School by LadyLouisa Mar 18, 2014
Summer Fling by kim19 Mar 18, 2014
Agent 49X: The paintball vendeta by laco Nov 18, 2013
Flow Vs Diva!!! by Joebwoy Oct 13, 2013
Jedi or Sith by Zac6251 Oct 13, 2013
The Slasher is comming for YOU by gpshaw Oct 13, 2013
Exploitation Theater by EndMaster Oct 13, 2013
Viral Infection. The first hours. by Ca1174 Oct 13, 2013
Decent.
Sonic adventures by Missygirl107 Oct 13, 2013
PROJECT: Absum by Hysterics Oct 13, 2013
A little incomplete, but has potential.
There Will Be Blood by Hotwired05 Oct 10, 2013
The Totally Random Courage/Computer Slash Story!!!!!! by crazyCTCDfan Sep 16, 2013
The Great Adventure of Aaron Appelapolous by Nalan Sep 16, 2013
Big Purple Bear by jeffisthebest Sep 16, 2013
Pretty stinking funny.
Xeresgate by michaelrayholt Sep 5, 2013
Awesome!
What Non-Western story do you belong in? by Lo1337a Sep 5, 2013
Pretty good... I was a warrior! Blood, gore, fighting, war. (hey, that rhymed!)
Ultros The Octopus by Leblanc4prez Aug 30, 2013
1,222 hits... Nice!
A Brutal Slasher Story - Please Add On To This by SlasherFan Aug 17, 2013
Doesn't last long enough
Holy Fuck by Risser Aug 17, 2013
Terrible
The Love Of Your Life by magic Aug 17, 2013
Even though it kinda sucks, I'm giving it a 7 due to many paths.
The Hunger Games by Concept Aug 17, 2013
Sorry, but I couldn't tell if this was serious or joking.
When I wasn't looking... by meteomage Aug 17, 2013
AWESOME
Feelin Lucky?....Punk? by Joebwoy Aug 14, 2013
To neutralize the 3.
A Trip to The Past by Priscilla Aug 5, 2013
It's awesome. I just wish you could choose the laser sword.
The Roundhouse by dryates Jul 21, 2013
Amazing.
Legend by EndMaster Jul 21, 2013
Awesome.
Kiara's adventure by CubVitaniLioness Jul 20, 2013
Reached an unfinished path WAY to quickly.
Questerman by paytrocks Jul 20, 2013
This is actually decent, and much more creative than most things seen on the site. But still needs a [i]lot[/i] of work.
Within the Depths of My Imagination by marvelescent Jul 20, 2013
It's okay. But, tone down the erotica. It's perfectly viable to make stories have sex like this, but at least add some story first.
The Choices You Make are Important ~ Substance Use/Abuse and Personal Safety by CandyBear616 Jul 19, 2013
10
Batman: Gotham Knights by MattCruea Jul 19, 2013
Good writing.
Sonic World Adventure Rush! by Rexcocorps Jul 19, 2013
It looks like a cool idea, but doesn't work.
The Last Stand by subty13 Jul 19, 2013
I chose 'jimmy', and nothing happened. That makes the score a lot lower. However, the writing was okay. Not that good, though. It earned a 5.
Death Song by EndMaster Jul 19, 2013
This is totally awesome. One of the best fantasy stories on the site.
Truth or Fail by manjotc Jul 19, 2013
Fail, not truth.
A story by Jingxy Jul 19, 2013
I'm giving this a 10 'cause I'm a crazy person.
Stuffguyman in the World of Things by guyman Jul 18, 2013
horrible.
A Mystical Adventure by DracorianAmanda Jul 17, 2013
This is a prime example of a great fantasy story... Look forward to seeing more.
the super random story of random stuff..... by JeepNixon92 Jul 17, 2013
This is horrible.
Horror of Horrors! by seveneves Jul 17, 2013
It's okay, I guess. But you should add more of the stories.
Will you die or fall in love? by DejectedFate Jul 14, 2013
Horrible.
dookiemon: the day of a trainer by Yowassupyal Jul 14, 2013
Hilarious.
Green Pigs Adventures by alessiofuffa Jul 13, 2013
Kind of funny... but a little pointless.
The Stupid Story by magic Jul 13, 2013
Kind of funny... but not that good.
Avater The Last Firebender by tgoodner12 Jul 13, 2013
Wow, this is terrible. The endings are so abrupt. Also, (and this is the main reason for your low score) you have to use quotation marks ("") whenever characters talk.
Government by P13B01 Jul 6, 2013
a little funny, if you like satyric humor.
This Story is Going Nowhere Fast by Sulldog35 Jul 6, 2013
Kind of funny, I guess.
Vengence Chapter 1: Rise to power by Firestarter Jul 6, 2013
Has a lot of branches... And Pretty good writing...
Diamonds Are Expensive by TheKoolAidGuy Jul 6, 2013
Totally hilarious.
dookiemon: the day of a trainer by Yowassupyal Jul 6, 2013
Oh so terrible.
megaman chronicles vs cut man by theone3150 Jul 6, 2013
Bad spelling, but a satisfactory number of branches, and I liked that it was a mega man game.
More Randomness by pencil123 Jul 6, 2013
Pretty funny... The low rating is only because you used that tired old start, 'you have a whole day to yourself, how will you spend it' that I've seen a thousand times.
RANDOM by pencil123 Jul 6, 2013
I haven't even played this yet, but I'm sorry, I have to give it a low rating. The only reason is, I've seen about a thousand games that start off like this.
Downworld by Dilpil77 Jul 6, 2013
This is decent... The writing could be better, but it had a lot of branches and was satisfyingly hard... The 'r' rating is completely unnecessary, though.
Fortunately, unfortunately (a very giant game) by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
I'll just give it an 'average' rating to start off.
A ghost, a room, and two grenades. by Lackofmop Jul 5, 2013
This is just so I can see your ratings... Also, please help with this! Thanks!
The One Word Story! by Marshmello Jul 5, 2013
Good idea, and it's kind of funny.
Dont Push The Red Button! by happyhak Jul 5, 2013
Totally hilarious.. Not much choice, but awesome.. doesn't quite deserve a 10, but this will make up for those idiots who give it a '1' with no comment.
Blind Date by Lucid Jul 5, 2013
Hilarity.
They Can't Kill Me by stretchboy2000 Jul 5, 2013
They can kill you.
Heroes in a Half Shell by donteatpoop Jul 5, 2013
funny.
Warlords: Strategic Conquest by urnam0 Jul 5, 2013
Amazing.
A Harry Potter Choose Your Own Adventure - Going to Hogwarts by hpinfonet Jul 5, 2013
Let down.
Mr. Wiggles Big Adventures (Not a Childrens Story) by NCPolice55571 Jul 5, 2013
Funny.
The Great Adventure by joopjoop1234 Jul 5, 2013
It's okay. Needs to be longer.
Supreme Quest by Zorn Jul 5, 2013
Not enough choices.
jawa starwars adventure by shadowzxv Jul 5, 2013
It's pretty funny.
Epic story of survival by ksuballislife Jul 5, 2013
It's funny, but the story's not that good... Still a good story tho.
Life as a superhero/villian by Yaya1314 Jul 5, 2013
It's good so far, but you need to finish it.
The House by kieren21 Jul 5, 2013
Pretty funny... But gets old quickly.
The Heist by packratt5454 Jul 5, 2013
It's actually pretty decent.
Mage Quest by Bentenmike Jul 5, 2013
Kind of funny... Didn't like the die rolling. But ok.
A Day In The Life Of An Average Person by gingerdreamland Jul 5, 2013
Meh. Reasonable amount of paths. Not really that great, but okay.
Random Adventure by Biasatti Jul 5, 2013
terrible
wired pokemon adventure by jaker Jul 5, 2013
awful
YOU save the entire Universe! by Benway Jul 5, 2013
Hilarious.
fight for the school 2 by adam1 Jul 5, 2013
Funny, but not that good.
Dungeons and Dragons Monsters Quiz by apotheosis Jul 5, 2013
Haha funny... But nerdy, too.
Pokemon Revolution by Bryton779 Jul 5, 2013
Lol this is pretty funny... But needs better spelling and grammar.
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Red by vanillafire Jul 5, 2013
Meh. Kind of funny, I guess.
You've Got Mail! (1) by macaronibrains Jul 5, 2013
Oh and this rating is to make up for the haters who just put half a star with no comment.
The neverending story by WarlordRak Jul 5, 2013
Hilarious... I was laughing the whole way through...
Leave All Your Hate At The Door by DigitalWings Jul 5, 2013
There's not even any branches. And the writing and grammar isn't much to talk at.
Get yourself a love muffin by JessicaLoves2Read Jul 5, 2013
It's okay, but not that good. A little bit boring.
Escape Artist by apotheosis Jul 5, 2013
Pretty terrible...
Breathe your last Breath by Mydeskiscool Jul 5, 2013
Two words... Bad spelling.
Harry Potter Fanfic by LittleRobinForever Jul 5, 2013
It's decent, I guess.. But there's almost no branches... It's too short.
The life of YOU! + Facepunch by Fang30 Jul 5, 2013
terrible
You've Got Mail! (1) by macaronibrains Jul 5, 2013
This is absolute hilarity... I love it... Only wish there were more branches...
Legend of Zelda by OwnU2 Jul 5, 2013
Monotonous and boring, but entertaining. (at least a little bit)
The Adventures Of Kat by werecat101 Jul 5, 2013
It's a good story... Has a lot of paths and is very diverse, but some choices are lackluster... Good overall though.
the first adventure by frozo Jul 5, 2013
Um, it's okay, I guess. The grammar could use some work.
Amnesia the dark descent part 1 by ramlod Jun 30, 2013
Um this is okay, but this site is for choose your own adventures only. So I'm giving it a "4".
Final Quest by Cat2000 Jun 30, 2013
Good and has a lot of branches, but predictable.
Infinite Cheesecake by aliciaspinnet Jun 30, 2013
This is ok
You cannot survive this game. by Lackofmop Jun 30, 2013
I'll just put this at first - if anyone disagrees, I'll change it.