PandaRose

Tricky. It's a great start, three people in a puzzling setup, more than a few possibilities. Still, it seems to require some knowledge of previous characters/ideas, limiting any potential contributors. Right now it's anyone's guess & game.

So far, interesting, good Cold Open. Right now, this could go any way, I like possibilities.

It's still pretty soon to tell, but so far the random business is looking good. One branch looks cool, one looks fittingly grim, and the coffeeshop/computer has a lot of potential.

So far, so good.

Decided to connect up a lot of loose ends around the 54000 choices, they ultimately come together anyway.
If I've screwed things up, I apologize.

Well, there's little more to say.

Okay, that was just silly, a long string of rooms with a very obvious punchline.

The end is perfect, hee hee hee.
I love cat jokes.

Is the story still evolving? Seems there's some good ideas here, hate to see this die of neglect.

It's just that good.