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Very well done. You have a great approach to recreate Death Note world and its inhabitants. I enjoyed the story, details, and pictures.
My only constructive feedback is there are some spelling and grammar errors throughout, such as it switching between present and past tenses. Otherwise, it is the best anime adaptation on IS.

Good work. It's probably the best zombie story I've read here so far.
My reinforcing feedback is that I liked its completeness and the story have a strong internal logic. My constructive feedback is to flesh out (pardon me) the other characters a bit more and establish the setting some.
Still, well done overall.

Middle-of-the-road story. It could use better description and characterization, but don't be discouraged if you wish to do another one.

As a side note, I'm unsure what to think about a teacher that allows Infinite Story as a class project... I'm leaning towards cool though.

Though it's not exciting, it's a little better written than average. The images lose some of their impact if they're overused.

The story has potential, but definitely needs to be fleshed out in some of the rooms so far. Also, there's a fair number of spelling and mechanical errors.

Superb. This could be published, though I acknowledge it would be for a niche market. I only regret dragavan seems to have left us.

One of the most fun stories I've read here, though I was a fan of the show and the game as a kid, so I'm probably biased. I hope you continue writing.

Great story. I hope you write more.

Good fun.

Good work. It's a bit short, but the writing that is there is done well.

Very lukewarm story. I recommend developing an antagonist or clarify a goal or goals to aim for.

This story is bad, bad, bad.

The RPG you're basing the story off is pretty esoteric, so it might have been better to introduce the characters. Still, the story is adequate and free of errors.

It's fair. It would be good if the story expanded out more and had more options.

Meh. The comedy is pretty weak and while I'm not offended a couple of the rooms exceed the R rating.

I like it so far. If you decide to continue with it, I hope there's more action, or "action." More characters would be good too.

Not a bad start. I would like to see more details and action in the story. The images are good, especially the illustrations. You should continue.

Probably the best action/adventure story I've read yet. It is fast paced and interesting. I like the images.

I agree it is perhaps the best mature level story (except for Days in the Dorm). I hope there are more contributions in the future, since there are many loose ends that leave one wondering what happens next.