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Kiara's adventure
by CubVitaniLioness
Dec 2, 2011
I didnt laugh so hard in a long long long time.I give it a 10 its easily one of the most hillarious stories on this site.Everyone who gave this story a 1 are fucking idiots.
Agree with Vesnicie
1 is the score this story truly desrves theres apsolutly nothink good about this story bad humor,no real plot just pointless story all around.
Great story deserves a far better rating and i wasnt offended at since im an atheist.
You probably 6 years old and have a lot of free time i would call this story shit,but then that word would be meaningless.
I think your username describes this story very well.
I think this story deserves better rating this story is quite random and not well writen,but atleast thres no lose ends which a big plius for me and theres also a few funny rooms so i think a 4 is that this story really deserves.
Why this story rating is so low i dont get it since its one of the most hilarous stories on this site a quality storie like this one should be rated at least an 8 or 9 and by the way those who rated this story a 1 should realise that randomness is more then acceptable in humor stories.
I cant believe i just waisted a minute reading this crap.
Its sad that this story turn out to be so bad the idea of the story is actually very good,but execution was horrible.Writing is bad and plot is pretty much non existent.This story deseves a 2,but because of great idea i give it an extra point 3 from me.
Impresive one of the best if not the best story in this site.All writers should learn from you 10 out of 10 this story is nearly flawless.
I give it a 1 just to save others from reading the most boring story in this site.
Not a bad random story give you 3 for an effort.
Your spelling is so bad i didnt understand this story at all.How old are you 5?At least make your story readible.I would give this story -10 unfortunatly i can 1 from me.
Didnt enjoy it bad story all around no plot,bad writing.I think you put very little effort into this story.
Horrible story.My question is are this story supposed to be funny?Well its not its not only unfunny this sotry also dont make any sense.I know this is your first story and i shouldnt go to hard on you,but my advice would be either improve your writing or dont write anymore of these.
Game is unfinished and has no story not good i give it a 3.
This story sucks..thats all.
This is suposed to be horror storie?Not even a 6 years old will get scared reading this story.Story is just beyond horrible.
So much unfinished rooms its almost imposible to play.Story is not bad and if you finished it would probably be funny.I would definetly give it a 6 or 7 if you finish a story.
Are this story supposed to be funny?
Stupiest story on this site.Dont write any more stories please.
So many lose ends i cant even get to the story.Finish your story before posting it in this site now i give it 2 out of 10 and whats because im generous.
Dont waste your time reading this story.Story is stupid and dont make any sense.
Not a bad story.Writing is good,but not to detailed,story is predictible,but interesting nontheless.The only think i really dislike about the story is what its not finished,make a story private and finish it.I give it 5 out of 10 decent story.
Horrible story dont waste your time reading this.
One of the worst stories on this site.
Not good...not good at all a lot of unfinished rooms and unoriginal story.
Even rookie dificulty is challenging.Good job!
What the hell is this?Did you call this mess a story?