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hey, michaelrayholt, you shouldn't ruin someone else's story just because you don't like what it's about. if you don't like it just stop reading it!!!
A Day in the Life by Xiao Jul 28, 2010
um, isn't this rated PG? what's with all the language??
this is really good!
Vixen Manor by CelticFrostQueen Jul 16, 2010
um, i think it would be better without the perverted pictures. just saying.
Cops and robbers by joe60 Jul 10, 2010
hey, this story is alright, but it was kind of short. make it longer and put at least a little bit on punctuation. i got kind of lost trying to read it. =)