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A Harry Potter Choose Your Own Adventure - Going to Hogwarts
by hpinfonet
Jul 29, 2010
hey, michaelrayholt, you shouldn't ruin someone else's story just because you don't like what it's about. if you don't like it just stop reading it!!!
um, isn't this rated PG? what's with all the language??
this is really good!
um, i think it would be better without the perverted pictures. just saying.
hey, this story is alright, but it was kind of short. make it longer and put at least a little bit on punctuation. i got kind of lost trying to read it. =)