chosenone
Ratings & Comments
Genesis
by spartan008
May 4, 2010
Wow, really great into to this story. You developed your characters well too. 10!
I like it.
Good story. I dont think it deserves a 10, but it sure doesnt deserve a 1 like the rater before me gave you so...10!
I like the idea of this, but some of the rooms dont have the same quality as others. Still, there are many good adventures in this one. 9!
Needs more work