Deathknight13
Ratings & Comments
Brothers
by donteatpoop
Jul 8, 2008
I've read most of this stories branches so far, I thought it was very good, keep working on it, the plot felt very interconnected.
A very good story, first story I ever read on this site, totally complete and gave realistic endings, I really felt like depending on what I did something that felt real was going to happen.
Great job
Great job
Excellent, even though i'm new, and this is the second story at this site i've read, (the first being ground zero) I think this is a very good read.
Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together,
I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed
Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together,
I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed