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OK, I'm sorry, but many of the answers have little to no effect on the overall score. For example, every single population zone all has the same percentage, 50%. Then, you give someone no option to say no weapons, and both of the weapon choices give the same 5% increase. You really need to work on this, dude. Come on, man, you're better than this. Be creative. Think in real-time situations. If you lived all by yourself, you would have a much higher chance of survival than if you lived in NYC, where over 3,000,000 people could be after you in just a week. Think, laco, think!!!

Okay, you have a good idea. You pretty much tell the same story from a different POV, and I like that. However, what I do not like is how linear it is and the way you write the story. You are good with ideas, but I would work on describing and using "big people" words a lot more often. Also, try to intrigue people with sudden pauses that give multiple choices, all of which lead them into thinking they made the right decision until BAM! they die. Work on it! However, I am somewhat proud that I allowed you to write a sequel. Keep up the good work.

This is a good story. However, it was completely linear, and that I didn't like. I like a little variety in a CYOA. However, you would be a great short story writer, and I advise you to take that step in your career. Good luck!

This story was horrible. There was no thought process, no creativity, no anything.

What the hell was this? This was crap. You really need to get your act together.

It was a good story, but it wasn't very difficult (except for the coin question). Good job!

I loved thsi story. I usually hate time-travelling items because its always ONLY in the medieval times. I don't like those kinds of movies and literature. However, you mixed the present with the past, allowed us to go to a few time zones, and you allow us to make mistakes. Great job, AgentRebellion, great job!

This was really a great story with lots of suspense. I don't know why you would make riddles in the story, though.

Pretty good story, but it doesn't make much sense.

That was the worst thriller or horror I've EVER read.

I saw this on funnypart.com called the big red button. It's funny as hell.

What the HELL is this?