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The Enchanted Maze
by
poetri
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The wind whips past you, once the atmosphere finally resolves itself again. The clouds flutter by at languorous (for them; for you it's more like terrifying) speeds, and below you a city resolves itself from a tiny black blotch to a complicated network of glowing points and dark asphalt. You brace yourself for the impact that must inevitably come...
... and find yourself standing, quite normally, down the yellow center divider in a busy street downtown. Someone honks at you and several more people yell. You courteously get out of the middle of the road.
You give a quick glance around you. Though you don't recognize the street exactly, it looks as close and familiar as every other English-speaking Western downtown street would. Busy shoppers fill up the empty space, jostling amongst one another and peering into the windows of shiny-fronted shops. Street merchants and food vendors wave jingly jewelry and dripping meat items around, hawking their wares in loud, commanding voices. Several bars and nightclubs stand inert, their curtains drawn, eerie and quiet in the middle of the day. Everywhere around you, from every angle and through every mode of sensory input, someone is advertising something at you.
You have no money and no idea where you are, but its far better than it could have been. Maybe you're no longer in the Maze at all - maybe the slight anxious tingle in the air is normal, considering your busy environs...
Choice
Grab a coffee and something to eat.
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
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No Room Link
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beepbeep - ID: 50182
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dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
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keepshells - ID: 20384
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No Room Link
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beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
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meurman pandant - ID: 38827
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smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
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ID: 135675
ID: 135674
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ID: 38829
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No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
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smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
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theprize - ID: 20406
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wishingwell - ID: 20395
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ID: 135678
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ID: 135674
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ID: 38944
ID: 38829
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No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
puzzleincorrect - ID: 20390
smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
toflyornot - ID: 20398
unicorn - ID: 20396
unicornwake - ID: 20401
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wishingwell - ID: 20395
woodenwell - ID: 20389
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ID: 135678
ID: 135677
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ID: 135675
ID: 135674
ID: 135673
ID: 135672
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ID: 38829
ID: 38828
ID: 37016
No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
puzzleincorrect - ID: 20390
smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
toflyornot - ID: 20398
unicorn - ID: 20396
unicornwake - ID: 20401
whitepinkpolka - ID: 20392
wishingwell - ID: 20395
woodenwell - ID: 20389
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ID: 20402
ID: 135679
ID: 135678
ID: 135677
ID: 135676
ID: 135675
ID: 135674
ID: 135673
ID: 135672
ID: 38944
ID: 38829
ID: 38828
ID: 37016
No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
puzzleincorrect - ID: 20390
smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
toflyornot - ID: 20398
unicorn - ID: 20396
unicornwake - ID: 20401
whitepinkpolka - ID: 20392
wishingwell - ID: 20395
woodenwell - ID: 20389
ID: 135680
ID: 20402
ID: 135679
ID: 135678
ID: 135677
ID: 135676
ID: 135675
ID: 135674
ID: 135673
ID: 135672
ID: 38944
ID: 38829
ID: 38828
ID: 37016
No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
puzzleincorrect - ID: 20390
smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
toflyornot - ID: 20398
unicorn - ID: 20396
unicornwake - ID: 20401
whitepinkpolka - ID: 20392
wishingwell - ID: 20395
woodenwell - ID: 20389
ID: 135680
ID: 20402
ID: 135679
ID: 135678
ID: 135677
ID: 135676
ID: 135675
ID: 135674
ID: 135673
ID: 135672
ID: 38944
ID: 38829
ID: 38828
ID: 37016
No Room Link
azaelia - ID: 20399
beepbeep - ID: 50182
begin - ID: 20381
blackyellowstars - ID: 20391
compymaze - ID: 37015
dolphen boy - ID: 38826
examineshells - ID: 20383
explorechoice - ID: 20404
explorenow - ID: 20386
falling - ID: 20405
futuristicwell - ID: 20394
greenbluewaves - ID: 20382
keepshells - ID: 20384
kidagain - ID: 37014
magiccoin - ID: 20400
makeawish - ID: 20397
meurman pandant - ID: 38827
moneyget - ID: 50187
puzzleincorrect - ID: 20390
smelltheflowers - ID: 20393
spendnight - ID: 52194
the map - ID: 41342
theprize - ID: 20406
toflyornot - ID: 20398
unicorn - ID: 20396
unicornwake - ID: 20401
whitepinkpolka - ID: 20392
wishingwell - ID: 20395
woodenwell - ID: 20389
ID: 135680
ID: 20402
ID: 135679
ID: 135678
ID: 135677
ID: 135676
ID: 135675
ID: 135674
ID: 135673
ID: 135672
ID: 38944
ID: 38829
ID: 38828
ID: 37016
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