When I wasn't looking...
You have found the secret room!!
Hmm.. this is just a rant about why I wrote this story...
The first story I read on this site was "Blind Date", which I thought was kind of interesting.. then I found a few others about a guy trying to get a girl... but most of them lacked any kind of story...
So I wrote this... I tried to have some character development, but try to keep it light and funny-ish. Oh yeah, and I tried to keep the room discriptions shorter, because I'm not very good at writing and too much discriptions would have probably made it boring...
Apparently I didn't do a very good job, and yes I KNOW I should have made it second person, but don't have time to go change everything...
Anyways, there IS a little bit about me and some people I know and the way I think that reflects in this story.. so for those who know me (or think they do).. yeah...
Anyways hope you enjoyed this story, and it wasn't a waste of time for you. I hope someone else with more skill than me writes a romance story with... a story and character development that is engaging and more realistic.. because I would like to read it...
Hmm.. this is just a rant about why I wrote this story...
The first story I read on this site was "Blind Date", which I thought was kind of interesting.. then I found a few others about a guy trying to get a girl... but most of them lacked any kind of story...
So I wrote this... I tried to have some character development, but try to keep it light and funny-ish. Oh yeah, and I tried to keep the room discriptions shorter, because I'm not very good at writing and too much discriptions would have probably made it boring...
Apparently I didn't do a very good job, and yes I KNOW I should have made it second person, but don't have time to go change everything...
Anyways, there IS a little bit about me and some people I know and the way I think that reflects in this story.. so for those who know me (or think they do).. yeah...
Anyways hope you enjoyed this story, and it wasn't a waste of time for you. I hope someone else with more skill than me writes a romance story with... a story and character development that is engaging and more realistic.. because I would like to read it...
