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"I dont think so pal!, you can play your too cool for school game with some other broad." You toss your own ciggarette on the ground next to his and turn towards the door.

He grabs your arm and pushes you roughly against the wall. You struggle against him, but he holds you fast. He looks you deep in the eye, and you feel your will to struggle drain away. His eyes, you notice are not brown as you first thought, but black. there is no differnece between pupil and iris. They glow slightly red and pulsate. It Terrifies you , but you cannot look away. You can't move at all.

After a few moments he smiles and you see that his teeth are not normal. They are pointed and sharp like some kind of animal. He leans forward and kisses your neck. It is exquisitely Erotic. waves of pleasure and pain throb through your body in rhithym with your heartbeat. Throb! Your knees grow weak and you begin to fall, but he puts his long arms around you and holds you against him. Throb.

His kiss leaves you breathless and you struggle to breath deeply, but you have lost all your strength. The joy is more painfull than anythign you have ever felt and the pain is more joyfull. A panic builds in you as the strength and pleasure drain out. You are powerless to resist this embrace. Throb.

Just then, the door to the club opens and the music and several partiers shuffle out. Rick Raises his lips from your neck and looks at the group as they pass out of alley. He pushes you up agains the wall and ducks back into the club, leaving you alone in the dark alley with only the thin smell of his cigarette to remind you he was there at all.

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