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Extend the Story - Add a Room
the perfect murder
by
wilio
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Chapter 1: Not so far but not so close
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Jack open his lovely windows to let the sunshine pierce the darkness.
It is a marveloues day for a walk he think for himself, as he getting dress for work. Jack is an officer, and he is the one that you will work with in the story. If he die, you fail to succeed in your mission.
Jack come pick you up in front of your house, ready to get to the office.
You two talk alot in the car and you ask politely to turn on the radio.
"A new serial killer is on the loose, named Gibrid, this guy gives his victim the choice to live or die by torturing themself. The police didn't
find any suspect trace leading to the murderer. The man face is still unknown"
"Well Well, yell Jack, this must be a case for us."
At the office, your boss get you in charge of the case of Gibrid and Jack decide to investigate with you.
You need to decide where to start?
Choice
Go to the torture house
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bomm - ID: 35910
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inn - ID: 35913
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ID: 35912
ID: 35915
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bomm - ID: 35910
in - ID: 35908
inn - ID: 35913
ID: 35889
ID: 35890
ID: 35899
ID: 35906
ID: 35912
ID: 35915
ID: 35917
ID: 35919
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bomm - ID: 35910
in - ID: 35908
inn - ID: 35913
ID: 35889
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ID: 35899
ID: 35906
ID: 35912
ID: 35915
ID: 35917
ID: 35919
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No Room Link
bomm - ID: 35910
in - ID: 35908
inn - ID: 35913
ID: 35889
ID: 35890
ID: 35899
ID: 35906
ID: 35912
ID: 35915
ID: 35917
ID: 35919
ID: 35920
No Room Link
bomm - ID: 35910
in - ID: 35908
inn - ID: 35913
ID: 35889
ID: 35890
ID: 35899
ID: 35906
ID: 35912
ID: 35915
ID: 35917
ID: 35919
ID: 35920
No Room Link
bomm - ID: 35910
in - ID: 35908
inn - ID: 35913
ID: 35889
ID: 35890
ID: 35899
ID: 35906
ID: 35912
ID: 35915
ID: 35917
ID: 35919
ID: 35920
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