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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Weapon
by
Korrin
Previous Room
The wall
had
been opened, but then it had somehow closed. That meant it could surely be opened again, right?
She could still hear the bandits on the other side. They had approached the door when she had banged on it the first time, so they knew she was there. She could hear them shouting to one another, and occasionally they banged on the door as well.
A few times, it crossed her mind that if she could open the door, then maybe they could too.
But it didn't happen. After a while they went away, and Jezirea was left in silence and near darkness.
She stood and stretched her legs out, and then proceeded to examine the door. Like the earlier tunnels, this area had red, throbbing lines of light etched in to the walls and door. She ran her hands over every inch of the surrounding area, but the surface was completely smooth; there was nothing that could possible pass as a button or latch.
Eventually, Jezirea gave up on that idea and began to study the patterns of red light. They obviously weren't natural. Could they be the key to opening the door?
Choice
There isn't anything else to examine, so take a closer look at the red lines.
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
No Room Link
alter - ID: 33175
arrowed - ID: 33082
bne - ID: 33088
bribery - ID: 60630
confrontweirdo - ID: 91460
deadend - ID: 33102
direction - ID: 33096
dog - ID: 33977
fall - ID: 33108
fearful escape - ID: 60629
fight - ID: 33081
fork - ID: 33101
golem - ID: 33066
heavy - ID: 34963
lost - ID: 33105
nosword - ID: 33100
nothing - ID: 33061
route - ID: 33079
start - ID: 33042
sword - ID: 33077
swordguy - ID: 34359
swordspeaks1 - ID: 91461
tavern - ID: 33129
trapped - ID: 34322
tunnel - ID: 33090
usethesword - ID: 91474
violenceiswrong - ID: 91476
ID: 91492
ID: 91488
ID: 98424
ID: 36425
ID: 105939
ID: 34610
ID: 34607
ID: 34574
ID: 34572
ID: 34570
ID: 34568
ID: 34566
ID: 34526
ID: 34366
ID: 34338
ID: 34323
ID: 33112
ID: 33099
ID: 33098
ID: 33080
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