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Extend the Story - Add a Room
The Revenge!
by
Ali14
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"look guys i really need to know what's wrong with Wade, Jake has he told you anything, lately"
Becky grinned, as Jake shook his head.
"Amy..."
Becky said hoping for a positive answer, Amy shook her head and grinned at Becky.
"I'm sure everythings alright"
Amy smiled, Becky grinned again.
Meanwhile back at the "H.O.Y" room, Wade kissed Sophie, then smiled and said,
"so...half eight, yours or mine"
she smiled then said,
"half eight, can it be at your's"
Wade grinned then said,
"it might be a bit tricky gettin everyone out but i'm sure i can"
She smiled then waved goodbye as he left the room. He walked down the aisle for the second time, just as the train came to a stop. He quickly made his way to their compartment and as the others stood up they saw him then said,
"where were you, we were starting to get worried, never mind come on"
Jake handed him his bags then followed him out. As they were walking towards the school Becky caught up with him then said,
"are you ok, it's just that you seem a bit strange lately, and a bit distant with me, is it cause..."
"look Becky no offence, but can we please talk about this later..."
Wade snapped, she stoppped then said,
"ok"
Amy walked up to her, dragging her suitcase behind her and said,
"are you alright"
A tear came to Becky's eye, she put on a smile then started walking again,
"i'm fine let's go, come on."
When they got into their common room that all four of them shared, Becky walked up to Wade and said,
"can we talk about it now, upstairs"
"come on, then"
he followed her up then closed the door behind them, as he turned from the door Becky slammed herself against him, and started kissing him very firmly.
"mmm...Bex, what's brought this on"
"nothing, it's just that i want to make you happy that's all"
She dug in for another kiss, as he stopped her and grinned, then said,
"you do make me happy"
"well then what am i doing wrong"
she said stepping back, he grinned again and said,
"what you're not doing anything wrong"
Wade walked up to her then smiled, he stroked her cheek then said,
"What's gotten into you, you never used to be like this"
"exactly, neither did you, Wade you've been acting weird for ages now, what's going on"
Becky smiled,
"nothing, i've just been busy that's all, ok...i'm sorry"
he smiled and gave her a little kiss.
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