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Extend the Story - Add a Room
C-047
by
jeffisthebest
Previous Room
You step back slowly with your hands before you. Your voice is unusually calm in such a dire situation.
"You guys have to listen to me," you say, "We can stop them. If everyone of us bands together, they have no hopes of keeping us down."
They continue their approach, though some of them appear to falter momentarily. The slight hestiation that a few of their ranks showed encourages you to continue with your vocal efforts.
"We can't be herded together and branded. Are we cattle? Will they be milking our teats next?" Many of them altogether stop while the teacher and several children continue their advance.
"Don't just stand there," you say, "Do something. Stand up and defend yourselves. Overthrow these bastards."
"Get him!!!", X-824 screeches, her voice uncontrolled and cracking in rage.
Eight of the 25 students lurch forward and attempt to seize you. You take another step back and find yourself against the wall.
You look beyond the brainwashed students and the teacher to the kids in the back who were not attacking; the ones who had stopped their approach.
"Don't just stand there!", you say mostly out of fear, but also in an effort to sound heroic, "Who's with me?!"
The teacher grabs you, as do a few students. They are not on you for long, as the remaining students have taken up your cause and chose to join you in battle.
Soon X-824 and her evil hoard of brainwashed students lay upon the floor in a massive pool of blood.
One of the girls in the class starts to cry, sobbing uncontrollably. You walk over to her and throw an arm around her shoulder, she practically collapses into your arms, weeping at the loss of those whom she helped to kill.
"I know," you say in a low tone, "I know. But it had to be done."
Kelly, one of the smarter girls in the class walks up to you. You've always thought she was a bitch, but it appears that she holds some admiration for you.
"What do we do now?" She asks you.
You look her square in the eye and take a deep breath. "We get the fuck out here," You say to her.
You walk over to the door and peer out. The hall seems to be clear. You duck your head back in.
You think about your options before announcing your plan. There are three doors out of here; the back door, the front door, and the cafeteria. The front door has only a few classrooms, and is the closest to your present position, but goes past the principals office, where the secretaries sit in behind their desks with a clear view of the hall. The back door is the farthest room from you, but has two classrooms before you reach a long hallway with no classrooms and no windows. The back door is at the end of that hall. The cafeteria is only a little farther away that the front office, but is littered with classrooms the whole way.
Do which way do you decide to go?
Choice
Front doors.
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